The New Howell Theater

presents

Rednecks in the Sky

by

Ronald L. Ecker

and

Terrell W. Ecker




Copyright 2000, 2011 by Ronald L. Ecker
All Rights Reserved



Log line: (Comedy.) Ex-cons try to pull off a perfect crime with the help of an unsuspecting small-town airplane pilot.



The New Howell Theater



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               FADE IN:

               EXT. "THE WRONG PLACE" TAVERN - NIGHT

               A warm Southern night.  A neon sign identifies "The Wrong
               Place."  LIVE COUNTRY MUSIC PLAYS inside.  

               A roadside sign in front reads "Henry Watts and the Volts."

               INT. TAVERN - NIGHT

               On stage, 30-ish good ol' boy HENRY WATTS, backed by the
               Volts -- your typical down-home country band -- sings an 
               old-fashioned cheating song for the patrons.

                                   HENRY
                         "If only I could take your lovin'
                           home,
                         If only my home, dear, could be
                         your own..."

               30-ish AL FINDLAY sits at a table.  He looks like an ordinary
               fellow with more than his share of troubles.  Gazing off as
               if depressed, Al pays no attention to Henry and the band.

               Al also pays no attention to his 30-ish wife MARY sitting
               beside him.  She and Henry gaze at each other as if Henry 
               is singing their song.

                                   HENRY
                         "Darlin', we'd be through
                         With secret rendezvous,
                         If only I could take your lovin'
                         home."

               The waitress PHYLLIS, 35, sets down a mug of beer for Al. 
               The one he has is almost empty.

                                   PHYLLIS
                         What's the matter, Al?

                                   AL
                         I got airplane troubles.

               Phyllis looks at Mary, amorously looking at Henry.

                                   PHYLLIS
                         That's all, huh? 

               Al watches Phyllis move off, then looks at Mary.

                                   AL
                         I wonder what she meant by that.

               At another table sits CHUCKIE TENBRINK, 21 with a cocktail.
               Of average build, he looks like the rich kid that he is. 

               Beside Chuckie sits fairly attractive SADIE, 34, drinking
               beer in her plain blouse and jeans.  She and Chuckie look
               like an odd match who may not have come here together.

                                   SADIE
                         Henry's good.  He sings like they
                         used to in Nashville.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         That's why he'll never make it.

                                   SADIE
                         Chuckie, why are you home anyway? 
                         Aren't you going to college?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I flunked out.  

                                   SADIE
                         How'd you do that?  Too much
                         partying?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         That was part of it.

                                   SADIE
                         What was the rest?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         They have a thing there about going
                         to class.

                                   SADIE
                         What are you going to do now?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Probably get disinherited.  Ain't
                         that some shit?

                                   SADIE
                         You're kidding.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         My sister in Chicago could get
                         every damn cent.

               Good old boy CARL, 37, with a beer in hand, sits down with Al
               and Mary.

                                   CARL
                         Al, I'm ready for my flying lesson
                         tomorrow... What's wrong?

                                   MARY
                         Al is about to be grounded.

                                   CARL
                         What?

                                   MARY
                         The bank gave him one month today
                         to come up with some cash or they
                         take his airplane.

                                   CARL
                         Shit fire and save your matches!
                         Al, why don't you go work at the
                         paper mill, like everybody else, 
                         'stead of trying to run that
                         airport?

               Al frowns with resentment.

                                   AL
                         I'm a flyer, that's why.  I don't
                         make toilet paper.  And nobody's
                         gonna clip my wings.

                                   MARY
                         Sure, Al.  Keep dreaming.  You 
                         think that money's going to fall
                         out of the sky?  You'll see toilet
                         paper falling first.

                                   CARL
                         Let's hope it ain't used.

               Good ol' boy REUBEN, 38, walks in.  He looks kind of mean. 
               Sadie doesn't notice Reuben as she looks with concern at
               Chuckie.

                                   SADIE
                         I thought you were going to take
                         over the paper mill for your dad.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Without a degree?  Who wants it
                         anyway.  I hate that damn stinking
                         pulp mill.

                                   SADIE
                         It does stink, don't it?  Perryville
                         is like the armpit of the world.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         No armpit smells that bad.  Let me
                         smell yours.

               Sadie laughs and shoves Chuckie away as he tries to smell it.

               Reuben walks up to the table.  

                                   REUBEN
                         What are you doing trying to smell
                         my girl's armpit?

                                   SADIE
                         He didn't mean nothin', Reuben.
                             (to Chuckie)
                         This is Reuben.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I'll smell any armpit I want to.

               Chuckie finishes his drink.

                                   REUBEN
                         How would you like to have your ass
                         stomped, buddy?

               Chuckie calmly rises.  He takes out some money to pay for his
               drinks.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Do you know who I am?

                                   REUBEN
                         I don't give a damn who you are.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I'm Chuckie Tenbrink.

                                   REUBEN
                         Well that's different.  Why didn't
                         you say so?  I just don't like
                         nobody seeing what Sadie here
                         smells like.

                                   SADIE
                         You make me sound like a landfill
                         or something.

               Chuckie leaves the money on the table.  He looks at Reuben. 

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Another mill worker on the old
                         man's payroll.  

               Chuckie puts a hand on Reuben's shoulder.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I feel your pain.  How would you
                         like a raise?

                                   REUBEN
                         That would be cool.

               Chuckie sucker-punches Reuben in the jaw, knocking him out.

                                   CHUCKIE
                             (to Sadie)
                         Keep 'em shaved, honey.

               Chuckie walks toward the door, everyone watching him.

               EXT. TAVERN PARKING LOT - NIGHT

               Chuckie is about to open the door of his Lexus, parked by an
               SUV.  

               The SUV side door opens, and from inside CURLY, a 30-ish,
               dumb-looking brute, aims a pistol at Chuckie. 

                                   CURLY
                         Get in here.

               Chuckie looks at Curly like he's crazy.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Do you know who I am?

                                   CURLY
                         Of course I know who you are.  Why
                         do you think we're doing this?  Now
                         get your ass in here.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Shove it, buddy.  I don't take
                         candy from strangers.

               Chuckie starts to open his car door.  Curly FIRES, blasting a
               hole in the car window.  

               As Chuckie turns to get into the SUV,

                                   CHUCKIE
                         You got any Snickers in there?

               EXT. AIRPORT ROAD - DAY

               A sign by the highway reads,

                              PERRYVILLE AIRPORT
                                 LEARN TO FLY
                               OR JUST DROP BY!
                               AL FINDLAY, MGR.

               EXT. AIRPORT - DAY

               There's a small, rundown, single-story terminal building. 
               Two single-engine planes sit by the weedy runway.

               Near the terminal building there's a house trailer with a
               pickup truck beside it.

               An SUV drives up.  It looks like the one Curly was in.

               INT. SUV - DAY

               BRYNA, 28, an average-looking woman in jeans, cuts the
               engine.  She pulls her shirttail out and opens the door.

               EXT. SUV - DAY

               Getting out of the van and facing the building, Bryna pulls
               her shirttail down over a pistol worn in a belt holster in
               the small of her back. 

               INT. TERMINAL BUILDING - DAY

               Al sits hung over at a desk behind the counter.  He's reading
               the obituaries in a newspaper.  Mary pours two cups of coffee.

               Through the front window Mary sees Bryna walk toward the
               entrance.

                                   MARY
                         Someone's coming in, Al.

                                   AL
                         Good.  Maybe they want a flying
                         lesson.  I feel lucky today.

                                   MARY
                         Yeah, you look it.

               Al manages a friendly smile as Bryna comes in.  She looks
               around.

                                   AL
                         Hi.  What can we do you for?

                                   BRYNA
                         How much do you charge for a plane
                         ride?

                                   AL
                         How much have you got?  Just
                         kidding.  No destination?

                                   BRYNA
                         Nah, just around.  I was passing
                         by, saw your sign.  I've never
                         flown before.

               EXT. WOODS - DAY

               Curly carefully aims his pistol.  He FIRES.

               He misses the target, a bottle set on a tree limb.

               40-ish MAC, handsome and suave compared to the brutish Curly, 
               steps out the door of a nearby cabin.  

                                   MAC
                         Curly, what the hell are you doing? 
                         You trying to draw some attention?

                                   CURLY
                             (aggravated)
                         No, I was tryin' to hit that damn
                         bottle.

                                   MAC
                         Come on inside.

               INT. CABIN - DAY

               Mac walks from the door to a couch where Chuckie sits
               blindfolded.  As Mac sits down,

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Where did you find that guy?

                                   MAC
                         Cross City Correctional Institution. 
                         We both graduated on the same day.

               Mac takes a folded piece of paper and a pen from his shirt
               pocket.

                                   MAC
                         Okay, Chuckie, we need your father's
                         telephone number.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         You kidding?  You've planned all
                         this, and you don't even have the
                         number?

               Curly comes in.

                                   MAC
                         Your home has an unlisted number.
                         We thought for sure you would know
                         what it is.

                                   CURLY
                         You do want Mommy and Daddy to know
                         you're alive, don't you?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         How much are you clowns going to
                         ask him for?

               Mac and Curly exchange looks.

                                   MAC
                         We aren't going to ask him for
                         anything.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Sorry, wrong choice of words.  How
                         much are you going to demand?

                                   MAC
                         One million dollars. 

                                   CHUCKIE
                         One million?  You don't know what
                         the hell you're doing.  What kind
                         of crooks are you?

                                   CURLY
                         What do you mean?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Let me tell you what you should do.

                                   MAC
                         Okay, go ahead.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Ask him for two instead of one.

               A beat.  Mac chuckles.

                                   MAC
                         Two instead of one.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         That's right.

                                   MAC
                         You think you're worth twice what
                         we want.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         What I'm worth isn't the point. 
                         Let me tell you the situation I'm
                         in.

               EXT. AL'S PLANE - DAY

               Flying at about 2,000 feet.

               INT. AL'S PLANE - FLYING - DAY

               Al gives Bryna her plane ride. 

                                   AL
                         I left the Navy to become an
                         airline pilot.  But I couldn't get
                         a job.  Airline pilots were being
                         laid off.  So I tried to get back
                         in the Navy.  Guess what.  The Navy
                         had signed up the laid-off airline
                         pilots.  

               Al looks at Bryna, who doesn't seem to be paying attention.

                                   AL
                         Then I heard about the old hometown
                         looking for an airport manager. 
                         What a joke.  I sell some gas, give
                         two or three flying lessons a week. 
                         I can't even pay for this airplane.

               Bryna still seems to pay no attention.

                                   AL
                         I see you're not crying yet, ma'am. 
                         That's good.  A positive outlook 
                         on life.

               Al tips the left wing, and points down to the large paper
               mill below.

                                   AL
                         That mill down there, that's
                         Tenbrink Pulp and Paper. 

               Bryna, leaning forward with feigned interest, has sneaked
               from her pocket a small, folded piece of paper with some 
               two-sided tape attached. 

               While Al looks down at the mill, Bryna tapes the paper to 
               the underside of the instrument panel.

                                   AL
                         That mill is the lifeblood of
                         Perryville.  Everybody and his
                         brother works there.

               Bryna nods understandingly, looking down at the mill.

               INT. CABIN - DAY

               Mac calmly paces as he and Curly listen to blindfolded
               Chuckie.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Cut me in -- two million, four
                         equal shares -- then you don't have
                         to worry about having to get rid of
                         me, and getting caught anyway, or
                         me identifying you later, and all 
                         that shit.  I go home free and
                         pretend that you got it all.  This
                         job is simple if you have my help.  

               Mac paces, saying nothing.  Curly frowns skeptically.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I can't pass up this chance.  I'm
                         facing a potential lifetime of
                         poverty.  You guys are like godsends. 
                         Now are you going to cut me in?  If
                         not, then go ahead and shoot my ass
                         now. 

               INT. TENBRINK MANSION - DAY

               Sheriff LANNY, 50-ish, and Sheriff's Deputy JUNIOR, 35, are
               with CHARLES TENBRINK, mid-60s, and 50-ish MRS. TENBRINK. 

               Tenbrink seems calm under the circumstances, while pleasant
               looking Mrs. Tenbrink seems very worried.

                                   LANNY
                         What I think we should do, Mister
                         Tenbrink, is call in the F.B.I.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Not yet.  He could be off on a
                         binge somewhere.  It would not be
                         the first time.  If he's been
                         abducted, we should hear from the
                         culprits soon.

               The PHONE RINGS.  As Mrs. Tenbrink anxiously goes to answer,

                                   LANNY
                         You may have said the magic word.

                                   MRS. TENBRINK
                             (into phone)
                         Hello.
                             (listens)
                         Chuckie!  Where are you?

               INTERCUT WITH:

               INT. CABIN - DAY

               Chuckie, still blindfolded, speaks on a cell phone.  Mac and
               Curly hover close by.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I don't know, Mom -- but I'm okay. 
                         Is Dad there? 

               Mrs. Tenbrink hands the phone to her husband.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Chuckie?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         I'm okay, Dad.  I'm afraid I've
                         been kidnapped.  I'm okay now, but
                         we need to take these guys
                         seriously.

               Tenbrink sighs resignedly.

                                   TENBRINK               
                         Okay, let's hear their demands. 

               Chuckie hands the cell phone to Mac.

                                   MAC
                         Mister Tenbrink?  The price for
                         your son's safe return is... two
                         million dollars.  

               Chuckie looks relieved.

                                   MAC
                         Now listen carefully.  No F.B.I.,
                         no public knowledge, or your son
                         will be dead.  Have two million
                         dollars in cash, in a duffel bag,
                         by ten a.m. day after tomorrow. 

                                   TENBRINK
                         Now wait a minute.  That won't be
                         easy.  

                                   MAC
                         You've got all day tomorrow to
                         arrange it.  A man with your
                         millions, Mister Tenbrink, can do
                         it.  We'll be in touch.

               Mac ends the call with a smile.

               INT. "THE WRONG PLACE" TAVERN - NIGHT

               Henry, backed by the Volts, sings for the patrons.  He looks
               right at Mary, who looks at him lustfully, while Al sits by
               Mary and glumly looks off, drinking his beer. 

                                   HENRY
                         "Dear, it's such a shame
                         To have to play this game, 
                         The cheatin' kind where lovers slip
                         around..."

               Phyllis and another 30-ish WAITRESS watch Al and Mary.

                                   PHYLLIS
                         I wonder if Al knows and doesn't
                         care.

                                   WAITRESS
                         Or would Al care if he knew.

                                   PHYLLIS
                         I think all he cares about is that
                         airport.  He can't make a go of it.

                                   WAITRESS
                         What about his wife?

                                   A MAN (O.S.)
                         More beer over here!

                                   PHYLLIS
                         I guess he can't make a go of that
                         either.

               Phyllis moves off.

               EXT. CABIN - NIGHT

               Dimly lit in the wilderness.  The SUV is parked nearby.

               INT. CABIN - NIGHT

               Chuckie, blindfold off, hands free, is huddled with Mac over
               an aeronautical chart, Mac explaining the plan. 

               Across the room Bryna and Curly play cards.  

                                   CURLY
                         Look at 'em.  Like long-lost
                         brothers.  I'm telling you, Bryna,
                         this is a big mistake.

                                   BRYNA
                         Why do you say that?

                                   CURLY
                         Before we each had a third of a
                         million.  Now we only get a fourth
                         of two.

                                   BRYNA
                         A fourth of two is more than a
                         third of one.

                                   CURLY
                         How can a fourth be more than a
                         third?

                                   BRYNA
                         There's more money involved.  How
                         far did you go in school, Curly?

                                   CURLY
                         I got as much as I could.  How far
                         did you go?

                                   BRYNA
                         I was a virgin.

                                   CURLY
                             (smiles)
                         Mac took care of that, eh?

                                   BRYNA
                         Mac will take care of you if you
                         get fresh with me.  Remember that,
                         asshole.

               Mac and Chuckie finish with the chart.  

                                   CHUCKIE
                         It's a good plan.  I like it.  You
                         must be a flyer.

                                   MAC
                         Used to be.  I got grounded by a
                         judge.  You a flyer?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Yeah.  I fly my dad's plane.  We
                         have our own strip.

                                   MAC
                         This Al Findlay out at the airport. 
                         You know him?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Not personally.  I've seen him
                         around.

                                   MAC
                         Think there'll be any problem day
                         after tomorrow?

                                   CHUCKIE
                         Well, there's always Murphy's Law. 
                         You know what that is?

                                   MAC
                         Yeah.  Whatever can go wrong will.

                                   CHUCKIE
                         But with me involved, this plan
                         looks really good.  We'll kick
                         Mister Murphy's ass.

               EXT. FINDLAY TRAILER - DAY

               It's morning.  

               SUPERIMPOSE: "TWO DAYS LATER."

               INT. BEDROOM - DAY

               Al lies snoring away.

               INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

               Sheriff Lanny nervously paces.  Deputy Junior waits at a
               desk.  

               The countrified dispatcher GLENDA, 23, sits checking her
               Lotto ticket with the numbers on her computer screen.

                                   GLENDA
                         Damn, I haven't gotten one Lotto
                         number out of six in a month.

               The PHONE RINGS, Junior answers.  

                                   JUNIOR
                         Sheriff's Office.
                             (listens)
                         Yes, Mister Tenbrink, he's right
                         here.

               Junior hands the phone to anxious Lanny.

                                   LANNY
                         Yessir, Mister Tenbrink.

               INTERCUT WITH:

               INT. TENBRINK MANSION - DAY

               Tenbrink, set to leave, is on the phone.  Mrs. Tenbrink
               worriedly stands by.

                                   TENBRINK
                         They just called.  I'm to go with
                         the money to Perryville.  
                             (glances at watch)
                         I need to start now.  I'm to check
                         in alone, by ten thirty, at the
                         Periwinkle Motel.

                                   LANNY
                         That rathole?

                                   TENBRINK
                         I'm to request Room Two.  There I'm 
                         to await further instructions.

                                   LANNY
                         Okay, Mr. Tenbrink.  We'll have the
                         place under surveillance.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Don't do anything to screw up this
                         deal, or you won't be county
                         sheriff after the next election.

                                   LANNY
                             (awkwardly)
                         Well, uh, I just want to perform my
                         duty, Mister Tenbrink, as an
                         ossifer of the law.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Just remember that my son's life is
                         at stake.  That may not sound like
                         much, and it isn't.

               Mrs. Tenbrink looks offended.

                                   TENBRINK
                         But, well, I have to perform my
                         duty as a father.

                                   LANNY
                         Yes, sir, Mister Tenbrink.

               Tenbrink hangs up.  As Lanny does likewise,

                                   LANNY
                         That guy's a straight shooter.

               Deputy JIMMY PAUL, 32, walks into the office.

                                   LANNY
                         Jimmy Paul, put on some civvies. 
                         You're going undercover.

               Jimmy Paul looks pleased.

                                   LANNY
                         Just be sure you stay undercover
                         till we make our move.
                             (uncertainly, to himself)
                         Whenever that is.

               INT. CABIN - DAY

               Mac talks on his cell phone while Chuckie, Curly, and Bryna
               sit listening.

                                   MAC
                         I'm Charles Tenbrink's executive
                         secretary.  Now something's come 
                         up, an important deal that the boss
                         is working on personally, and on
                         the Q.T.  He'll be in Perryville
                         shortly, and he'll need an
                         airplane.  His own plane is
                         undergoing maintenance.

               INTERCUT WITH:

               INT. AIRPORT TERMINAL BUILDING - DAY

               Al, in a bathrobe, looks hung over as he talks on the phone
               at the desk.  Mary pours him some coffee.

                                   AL
                         Where's he need to go?

                                   MAC
                         On the Q.T., Mister Findlay.  The
                         boss will fill you in once you're
                         airborne.  He doesn't want you to
                         discuss this beforehand with 
                         anyone -- not even with him,
                         understand? -- till after you've
                         taken off.

                                   AL
                         I won't mention it to him.  We'll
                         talk about the weather, or the
                         stink from his pulp mill.  Is he
                         going to come here, or...
                             (takes notes)
                         "Periwinkle Motel.  Room Two.  At
                         eleven fifteen."  Are you sure he 
                         said The Periwinkle?
                             (listens)
                         Okay.  Now my fee will be -- let's
                         see, depending on where we're 
                         going, which I don't even know...

                                   MAC
                         Your fee will be one thousand
                         dollars.

                                   AL
                             (brightly)
                         That's just what I had in mind.

                                   MAC
                         Have a good trip.  And Mister
                         Findlay:  Not a word, till you're
                         airborne. 

                                   AL
                         I won't even tell my wife I'm
                         taking Mister Tenbrink somewhere.

                                   MAC
                         Goodbye.

               They hang up.

                                   MARY
                         What was that all about?

                                   AL
                         I'm taking Mister Tenbrink somewhere.

                                   MARY
                         Where?

                                   AL
                         They wouldn't say where.  It's a
                         hush-hush deal.  He'll tell me when
                         we're airborne. 

                                   MARY
                         What's he paying you?

                                   AL
                         One thousand bucks.

                                   MARY
                             (sarcastically)
                         We're going to be rich.

                                   AL
                         Is that all you've got to say?

                                   MARY
                         No.  Why don't you take it, Al, and
                         buy us two tickets -- on anything --
                         to get us out of here?

                                   AL
                         'Cause everything's tied up here.
                         I'm in too deep.  We can't get out
                         from under.

                                   MARY
                         Maybe you can't, buster, but one of
                         these days I'm --

                                   AL
                         Yeah, why don't you go back to your
                         mama in Pensacola?

                                   MARY
                         Because you can't get there from
                         here!

               Mary heads for the trailer.

                                   AL
                         I've got to get ready.  You go fill
                         up the plane.

               As Mary goes out the door,

                                   MARY
                         Fill it up yourself! 

               EXT. PERIWINKLE MOTEL - DAY

               A seedy dump.  A tired old sign identifies "Periwinkle
               Motel."  No sign of a guest.

               EXT. STREET - DAY

               An unmarked car parks along the curb near the motel.  There
               is light traffic on the small-town street.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - DAY

               In street clothes behind the wheel sits Deputy Jimmy Paul,
               his cap brim low over his eyes as he watches the motel.

               INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

               Lanny is on the phone.

                                   LANNY
                         Remember what I told you:  When
                         Mister Tenbrink checks in, whoever
                         contacts him, whoever calls, 
                         or comes in person, or anything 
                         else -- you just play along like 
                         everything's normal.

               INT. MOTEL OFFICE - DAY

               The motel owner is a little old man named SAM, who sits
               listening on the phone, his little old WIFE standing by.  

                                   SAM
                         I understand, Sheriff.
                             (listens)
                         We both understand.

               INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

               Lanny grabs his hat as Junior waits.

                                   LANNY
                         Let's go.

               On their way out they pass dispatcher Glenda, who chews gum
               and reads a paperback.

                                   LANNY
                         Me and Junior's gonna patrol like
                         everything's normal.

               EXT. LIMOUSINE - DAY

               The limo moves along the highway to Perryville.

               INT. LIMO - MOVING - DAY

               A CHAUFFEUR, 47, drives while Tenbrink sits in back with a
               packed duffel bag.

               INT. FINDLAY TRAILER - DAY

               Al adjusts his tie at a mirror.  He and Mary argue.

                                   AL
                         I'm telling you for the last time. 
                         Get off my back or I'll fire you.

                                   MARY
                         Fire me?  I'm your wife!

                                   AL
                         That doesn't mean I've got to keep
                         you on the payroll. 

               Al heads for the front door, Mary right behind him.

                                   MARY
                         Payroll?  When's the last time I
                         got paid anything?

                                   AL
                         When's the last time you did a
                         day's work?

                                   MARY
                         When's the last time there was a
                         day's work to do around here?

               EXT. TRAILER - DAY

               Al comes out of the trailer and heads for his pickup truck. 
               Mary yells after him from the doorway,

                                   MARY
                         You talk about working your ass
                         off!  Doing what?

                                   AL
                         Trying to keep you off of it! 

               Al gets in his truck and starts the engine.

                                   AL
                         And I'll tell you something else!

                                   MARY
                         Yeah?

                                   AL
                         That plane better be ready when I
                         get back! 

               Al heads for the highway.

               EXT. MOTEL - DAY

               The limo pulls in from the street.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - DAY

               Jimmy Paul sits up, watching the limo.  He picks up his radio
               mike.

               INT. LANNY'S PATROL CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Lanny drives, Junior beside him.  They're patrolling like
               everything's normal.  On the radio they hear,

                                   JIMMY PAUL (V.O.)
                         Tenbrink ten-ninety-seven. 

               Lanny and Junior exchange tense looks and keep patrolling.

               EXT. MOTEL - DAY

               Sam gives the Chauffeur a room key at the office door.

               Sam and his Wife watch as Tenbrink and the Chauffeur, the
               duffel bag in hand, head toward Room Two.

               EXT. MAIN STREET - DAY

               Al's truck comes into town.

               INT. AL'S TRUCK - MOVING - DAY

               Al waves hi to a friend on the street as he drives. 

               INT. LIMO - DAY

               The Chauffeur gets into the limo.  He glances toward Room
               Two, then takes a satisfying snort from a flask. 

               INT. MOTEL ROOM - DAY

               Dismal.  As he looks around, Tenbrink takes a pill from a
               prescription bottle.  

               INT. BATHROOM - DAY

               Entering, Tenbrink looks at the rather grimy sink, and sees
               no glass or cup.  

               He pops the pill in his mouth and manages to swallow it dry.

               EXT. MOTEL - DAY

               Al's truck pulls in.  The limo is gone.

               INT. MOTEL OFFICE - DAY

               Sam and his Wife look puzzled by Al's arrival.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - DAY

               Jimmy Paul watches.

               INT. MOTEL OFFICE - DAY

               Sam and his Wife watch Al approach the office door.

                                   SAM
                         Remember, everything's normal.

               Al enters.  He nods hello with a smile.

                                   AL
                         How are y'all doin'?

                                   SAM
                         Fine, Al.  What brings you here? 

                                   AL
                         Mister Tenbrink checked in? 

               Sam looks surprised.  Al seems proud of his mission.

                                   SAM
                         Yeah.

                                   AL
                         Room Two?

               Sam looks more surprised.

                                   SAM
                         Yeah.

               Al starts to go, then looks at the couple with what could be
               construed as a concern for their safety.

                                   AL
                         Did he tell you where we're going?

               Sam shakes his head "no."  Al smiles again, as if perhaps
               relieved.

                                   AL
                         That's good, Sam, that's good.  And
                         my lips are sealed.

               Sam and his Wife watch Al leave and head for Room Two.  

                                   SAM
                         Al Findlay's involved.

                                   WIFE
                         It's enough to make you lose your
                         faith in humanity.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - DAY

               Jimmy Paul looks incredulous at what he sees.

               INT. MOTEL ROOM - DAY

               Tenbrink opens the door.  There stands Al.  Tenbrink looks
               him over.

                                   AL
                         Mister Tenbrink.  I'm here to, uh, 
                         take you to, uh, your destination. 

                                   TENBRINK
                         Very well.

               Tenbrink gestures toward the duffel bag.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Am I to carry this, or are you? 

                                   AL
                         Oh, no, sir, you let me take care
                         of that.

               Al comes in for the bag.

               EXT. MOTEL - DAY

               Al puts the duffel bag in the bed of his truck.  He opens the
               passenger door for Tenbrink.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Could I ask you where my son is?

                                   AL
                         You could ask me, Mister Tenbrink,
                         but I'm afraid I couldn't tell you.

               Tenbrink seems to accept that and gets in the truck.  Al,
               with a wondering look, closes the door and heads for the
               driver's side.

               INT. LANNY'S PATROL CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Lanny and Junior patrol as Lanny picks up his radio mike.

                                   LANNY
                         Jimmy Paul, did I hear you correct? 
                         Did you say "Al Findlay"?

                                   JIMMY PAUL (V.O.)
                         That's A-ffirmative, Sheriff.

               EXT. MOTEL - DAY

               Al's truck leaves.

               EXT. STREET - DAY

               Jimmy Paul's unmarked car follows Al's truck.

               INT. PATROL CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Lanny and Junior patrol.  

                                   LANNY
                         Damn.  If they use an airplane,
                         what are we going to do?  How are
                         we going to put a tail on an
                         airplane?

                                   JUNIOR
                         An airplane already has one.

               Lanny glares at Junior.  

                                   JUNIOR
                         Sorry, Sheriff.  I couldn't resist.

               INT. AL'S TRUCK - MOVING - DAY

               Tenbrink studies him as Al drives.

                                   TENBRINK
                         I've seen you before.

                                   AL
                         Could be.  Al Findlay.  I run the
                         airport.

                                   TENBRINK
                         "Al Findlay."

                                   AL
                         Right.

                                   TENBRINK
                         You "run the airport."

                                   AL
                         Yep.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Well, Al -- mind if I call you Al?

                                   AL
                         Please do.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Aren't you being rather brazen?

                                   AL
                         I wouldn't call it brazen.  Foolish
                         maybe.  Yeah, I guess I was a fool
                         for thinking it would ever work.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Then why go through with it?

                                   AL
                         It's like I told my wife:  I'm
                         already in so deep, there's no way
                         out.  If she wants out, she can
                         high-tail it to Pensacola.

                                   TENBRINK
                         You're right.  There's no way out.
                         Just remember you asked for it.

               Al looks incredulous and offended.

                                   AL
                         Okay, I asked for it.  Do I look 
                         worried?  If they want me, they
                         know where to find me.

                                   TENBRINK
                         I'm sure they will.

                                   AL
                         Fine.  Just let 'em try clipping my
                         wings.  They'll have to drag me out 
                         of that plane.  They might as well
                         shoot me.

                                   TENBRINK
                         You're a bigger fool than I thought. 
                         The sooner they get you the better.

                                   AL
                         Thanks for the encouraging words.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Don't mention it.  The last thing I
                         want to hear from you is a sob
                         story.

                                   AL
                         You're so full of shit it's
                         unbelievable.

                                   TENBRINK
                         Look what's talking.  Now about
                         this deal --

                                   AL
                         You can stick it up your ass.  And
                         that duffel bag with it. 

               Al starts braking the truck.

                                   TENBRINK
                         What are you --

                                   AL
                         The deal's off.

                                   TENBRINK
                         But --

                                   AL
                         It's not worth putting up with your
                         crap.  I don't work at your goddamn
                         mill, see.

               Al turns the truck hard left.

               EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY

               Al's truck makes a U-turn, heading back for town.

               INT. AL'S TRUCK - MOVING - DAY

               Tenbrink looks incredulously at Al.

                                   TENBRINK
                         What do you think you're doing?

                                   AL
                         I'm taking you back to your classy
                         motel.  Unless you'd rather walk.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Driving, Jimmy Paul quizzically watches Al's truck approach
               from the opposite direction. 

               Jimmy Paul pulls down his cap brim, pulls in his chin.

               EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY

               The truck and unmarked car pass each other.

               The unmarked car pulls over and starts making a U-turn.

               INT. AL'S TRUCK - MOVING - DAY

               Al and Tenbrink as before.

                                   TENBRINK
                         But you can't do this.

                                   AL
                         You watch me.

               INT. PATROL CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Lanny and Junior patrol.  Lanny looks pleased.  

                                   LANNY
                             (into mike)
                         Ten four.  Stay with 'em, ya hear?

                                   JUNIOR
                         They're turning away from the
                         airport?

                                   LANNY
                         That's more like it, I tell you.
                         Anything but that airport.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Jimmy Paul, driving, looks ahead with disbelief.  Al's truck
               is making another U-turn.

               Jimmy Paul pulls down his cap brim, pulls in his chin.

               EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY

               The truck and unmarked car pass each other.

               INT. UNMARKED CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Jimmy Paul doggedly pulls over and makes another U-turn.

               INT. AL'S TRUCK - MOVING - DAY

               Al looks amazed by what Tenbrink has told him.

                                   TENBRINK
                         And that's who I thought you were.

                                   AL
                         Wow.  I can't believe it, Mister
                         Tenbrink.  Why do they get me
                         involved?

                                   TENBRINK
                         Just do what they told you.

                                   AL
                         But we don't even know where we're
                         going.

                                   TENBRINK
                         I assume they will let us know.

                                   AL
                         But -- but they can't once we're
                         up, without people hearing 'em on
                         the radio.

                                   TENBRINK
                             (impatiently)
                         They told you to give me a plane
                         ride.  That's what you're going to
                         do.

               INT. PATROL CAR - MOVING - DAY

               Lanny hangs up his mike with aggravation.

                                   LANNY
                         They're going to that airport.  How
                         are we gonna tail 'em?

                                   JUNIOR
                         In the movies, I've seen 'em use
                         helicopters.

                                   LANNY
                         To chase airplanes?

                                   JUNIOR
                         Well, no, I think they were just
                         chasin' people.

               INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

               Lanny, hustling in, Junior behind him, goes straight to
               Glenda, still reading.

                                   LANNY
                         Who owns those airplanes out at
                         Findlay's?

                                   GLENDA
                         Let's see, there's Al's, and --
                         Henry Watts owns one, and --

                                   LANNY
                         That's right, by God, Henry Watts.
                         Get Henry on the phone right now.

               INT. TERMINAL BUILDING - DAY

               Mary, lazing as she talks on the phone, notes Al's truck
               arrive.

                                   MARY
                         Here's Al now, with Mister Big.
                         They should be gone in, say, ten
                         minutes, Henry.  See ya later?

               Mary smiles and hangs up.

               INT. SHERIFF'S OFFICE - DAY

               Glenda chats on the phone.

                                   GLENDA
                         Is that one of those pay sites, or
                         is it free?
                             (listens)
                         Let me write it down... "Dubya
                         dubya dubya dot grossout -- "

               A TOILET FLUSHES.

                                   GLENDA
                         " -- dot com."

               Lanny comes out of the john.

                                   GLENDA
                         Sheriff, I've finally got Henry.

               Lanny hustles over and takes the receiver.

                                   LANNY
                         Henry?  This is the sheriff.  Get
                         your ass out to the airport.  I'm 
                         deputizing you.  I want you to tail
                         Al Findlay's plane.

                                   HENRY (V.O.)
                             (filtered, on phone)
                         Tail Al's plane?

                                   LANNY
                         Henry, this is a matter of life and
                         death.  Get your ass on the move.

               EXT. AIRPORT - DAY

               Al's plane takes off.

               INT. TERMINAL BUILDING - DAY

               Mary primps.  She looks out the front window and sees Henry's
               truck come barreling down the road, SCREECHING to a halt in
               front of the building. 

               Henry jumps out of the truck and runs for the entrance.  Mary
               watches, looking enthralled by her lover's apparent zeal.

               Henry runs in to the counter, Mary waiting behind it.

                                   MARY
                         How long has it been, Henry?

               Henry breathes heavily from his run.

                                   HENRY
                         Where did Al say he was going?

                                   MARY
                         Al doesn't know where he's going.

                                   HENRY
                         Then to hell with it.

                                   MARY
                         What are you talking about?

                                   HENRY
                         I wish I knew.

               LATER

               While Henry hovers over her shoulder, Mary makes a "Gone
               Fishing" sign with a marker.

                                   HENRY
                         I've wrote a new song, Mary. 
                         You're gonna like it.

               Henry sings seductively, a cappella, his hands roaming Mary's
               shoulders and arms, while Mary makes her sign.

                                   HENRY
                         "You're bewitchin', babe, in almost
                         every which-a-way -- "

               The PHONE RINGS.  Mary starts to pick up the receiver.

                                   HENRY
                         If that's the sheriff, I'm not
                         here.

                                   MARY
                         Why?  What have you done?

                                   HENRY
                         It's what I ain't done.  He'll
                         pitch a fit.

                                   MARY
                             (into phone)
                         Hello.

               INT. CABIN - DAY

               Mac is on the cell phone.  

                                   MAC
                         I have a message for Al Findlay. 
                         It's urgent.  Would you be kind
                         enough to deliver it, please?



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