The New Howell Theater

presents

A Thorn in the Flesh

A Screenplay by

Ronald L. Ecker


based on the life of Regine Olsen

and the life and works of

Soren Kierkegaard




Copyright 2008, 2012 by Ronald L. Ecker
All Right Reserved




Soren Kierkegaard and Regine Olsen



Log line: The tragic love story of the troubled young writer Soren Kierkegaard and the beautiful Regine Olsen.




This online version has been divided into three Web pages.








               FADE IN:

               INT. MANSION - SITTING ROOM - DAY (1897)

               White-haired REGINE, 76, in a black silk dress, is
               interviewed by journalist RAPHAEL MEYER, 29.  Both are
               Danish.  

                                   MEYER
                         When did you first meet Soren
                         Kierkegaard?

                                   REGINE
                         I met him at the home of Bolette
                         Rordam.  I was only fifteen.  I got
                         to know him two years later, when I
                         guess he thought I was old enough
                         to court.

                                   MEYER
                         What year was that?

                                   REGINE
                         Well, I was seventeen... 

               EXT. COPENHAGEN, DENMARK - DAY (1838)

               People walk or ride in horse-drawn carts and carriages in the
               port city's downtown Nytorv ("New Market") Square.  There's a
               fountain in the center of the cobblestoned square.  

                                   REGINE (V.O.)
                         It would have been 1838.  Soren was
                         a university student in those days. 
                         You might say he was a perpetual
                         university student.

               During this, SUPERIMPOSE: "COPENHAGEN, DENMARK."

               INT. MUSIC TEACHER'S HOME - DAY

               Pretty YOUNG REGINE OLSEN, 17, has a singing lesson with her
               MUSIC TEACHER, 50, while Regine's girlfriend THRINE DAHL, 17,
               sits listening. 

                                   MUSIC TEACHER
                         No, Regine, sing from here.  Sing
                         from the diaphragm.

               INT. PLEISCH'S TEAROOM - DAY 

               SOREN KIERKEGAARD, 24, looks at the time on his pocket watch. 

               Sitting alone at a table, Soren is slim, with a pleasant
               face.  Wearing a buttoned coat, he holds a bamboo walking
               stick, his top hat on the table.  Other patrons are in b.g.

               Soren expectantly watches passersby on Amagertorv, one of the
               city's main streets, through the front window.  

               He sees Regine passing by on the street with Thrine.  Soren
               grabs his hat and rises, taking money from a pocket for his
               coffee.  

               EXT. AMAGERTORV STREET - DAY

               Regine and Thrine walk, unaware that Soren -- greeting
               friends and acquaintances among passersby -- follows them.  

               EXT. JANSEN HOME - DAY 

               Soren watches as Regine says goodbye to Thrine and enters a
               two-story home.  Thrine proceeds down the street.

               Soren stops by the home and regards it.

               A YOUNG MAN ON THE STREET walks by from a neighboring house. 
               Soren points with his cane toward Jansen's.

                                   SOREN
                         Excuse me.  Can you tell me who
                         lives at this address?

                                   YOUNG MAN
                         That's Mrs. Jansen, sir.

                                   SOREN
                         Thank you.

               Soren seems unsure what to do next.  Then an upper window
               opens and MRS. JANSEN, 68, beats some dust from a cloth. 

               Soren tips his hat with a smile.

                                   SOREN
                         Good afternoon.  Mrs. Jansen, I
                         believe.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Good afternoon.  Do I know you, 
                         sir?

                                   SOREN
                         I am Soren Kierkegaard.  My father
                         is Michael.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Oh, yes, I certainly know your
                         father!  I bought so many clothes
                         from him, before he sold his
                         business.  How is he?

                                   SOREN
                         He is well.  And he has often
                         spoken kindly of you.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         So you are his son.

                                   SOREN
                         The youngest of two surviving.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Would you like to come in for a
                         fresh cup of tea?

               INT. JANSEN HOME - SITTING ROOM - DAY

               Soren sits sipping his tea while Mrs. Jansen knits.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         I am flattered, Mister Kierkegaard,
                         that you would want to spend some
                         time chatting with an old lady 
                         like me. 

                                   SOREN
                         Why do you think that I wouldn't?

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Well, you must have many friends 
                         your own age at the university 
                         and all.

                                   SOREN
                         Why, madam, I would much rather
                         talk with you older ladies than
                         with those young fellows, so full
                         of themselves.  You should hear
                         their pretentious discussions of
                         Hegel, or of Schleiermacher, or
                         of liberalism, or of censorship 
                         of the press.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         What do you like to talk about with
                         us older ladies?

                                   SOREN
                         Why, it doesn't matter.  Some good
                         family gossip, the weather, or how
                         much milk it takes to produce a
                         pound of butter.

               Regine enters the room with her cousin HENRIETTE, 18.  Soren
               rises.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Mister Kierkegaard, this is my
                         niece Regine Olsen, and my
                         grandchild Henriette.

                                   SOREN
                         I am pleased to meet you,
                         Henriette.

                                   HENRIETTE
                         Likewise, Mister Kierkegaard.

                                   SOREN
                         Regine, haven't we met before?

               They sit down.

                                   REGINE
                         Yes.  At the home of the Rordams,
                         about two years ago.   A group of 
                         us girls were there.  And you came 
                         by to borrow a book, I believe.

                                   SOREN
                         I remember.  To return a book,
                         actually.  I do such odd things,
                         returning things that I borrow.  

                                   REGINE
                         I believe you were seeing Bolette.

                                   SOREN
                         Yes.  Till she saw the last of me.

                                   REGINE
                         She asked you to speak to us.

                                   SOREN
                         What did I speak of?

                                   REGINE
                         I don't remember.  I just remember
                         how the words seemed to flow like 
                         a stream.

                                   SOREN
                         I remember your face, your
                         expression.  You know how some
                         images stick in your mind?

                                   REGINE
                         Yes.  

                                   HENRIETTE
                         I was there too.
                             (mock hurt)
                         But you don't remember me.

                                   SOREN
                         Why, if Regine had not grabbed my
                         attention first, I would have been
                         absorbed by your presence.

               Regine and Henriette giggle.

                                   REGINE
                         You know, my parents have open
                         house once a week.  Wednesday
                         evenings.  You are welcome to come,
                         Soren.

                                   SOREN
                         I would like that.  

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Her father is State Councillor
                         Olsen.

                                   SOREN
                         I know him.  I would like that
                         indeed.  One Wednesday evening I
                         just might show up.

               A pause, Soren gazing at Regine.  She smiles in a self
               conscious way.  She rises.

                                   REGINE
                         Well, Auntie, I'll be running along
                         now. 

                                   SOREN
                             (rises)
                         You are going home, are you?

                                   REGINE
                         Yes.  I was on my way home from my
                         music lesson, but I had to tell
                         Henriette something.

                                   SOREN
                         Well then, let me escort you.  I
                         was out walking anyway, as I do
                         every day in this fair town of
                         ours.
                             (takes last sip of tea)
                         Mrs. Jansen, you should open a
                         tearoom.  I would be your best
                         customer.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Oh, Mister Kierkegaard, really.

               EXT. OLSENS' STREET (BORSGADE) - DAY

               Soren and Regine chat as they walk on Borsgade.  There is a
               row of four-story gabled mansions on one side of the street,
               and a canal on the other.

                                   REGINE
                         My sister is the oldest -- she's
                         married -- then my older brother 
                         and me.  And you?

                                   SOREN
                         One surviving brother.  Gone are
                         two brothers, and three sisters.

                                   REGINE
                         You mean they've all died?

                                   SOREN
                         Yes.  All five.  Would you believe
                         there's a curse on the family?  I
                         must warn you. 

                                   REGINE
                         My goodness.  Are you sure it's a
                         curse, Soren?

               They stop at the front door of the Olsen mansion.

                                   SOREN
                         None of them lived past the age of
                         Christ.  Thirty-three.  

               A pause, Soren gazing at her, Regine seemingly not knowing
               what to say.

                                   SOREN
                         I enjoyed the walk with you.

                                   REGINE
                         I enjoyed it too.

                                   SOREN
                         Well, that was the purpose.

               Regine opens the door.

                                   SOREN
                         It was a pleasure to meet you
                         again, Regine.

                                   REGINE
                         Don't forget the open houses.

                                   SOREN
                         How could I?  I may see you this
                         Wednesday.  Goodbye.

               Soren starts to go.

                                   REGINE
                         Soren... How did you happen to be
                         at my aunt's house?

                                   SOREN
                         Do you know what I think?  An angel
                         led me there.  Do you believe in
                         angels?

                                   REGINE
                         Yes, I suppose so.

                                   SOREN
                         So do I.

               Soren moves off, Regine watching him.

               EXT. KIERKEGAARD HOME (NO. 2 NYTORV) - NIGHT

               The four-story town house stands next to the courthouse on
               Nytorv Square.  A few people move about on the square.

               INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

               At a long dinner table, Soren dines in silence with his white
               haired father MICHAEL KIERKEGAARD, 82, and Soren's brother
               PETER KIERKEGAARD, 33.  A 50-ish HOUSEKEEPER attends.  

               Michael breaks the silence as they eat,

                                   MICHAEL
                         Soren, have you given any further
                         thought to taking the theological
                         exam?

                                   SOREN
                         No, Father, I haven't.

                                   MICHAEL
                         Have you given any thought to
                         taking any sort of exam?

               As Soren eats without concern,

                                   SOREN
                         Not anytime soon, Father.  It
                         requires much preparation.

                                   MICHAEL
                         Are you attending any university
                         lectures at all?

                                   SOREN
                         Why, yes, Father, ask my brother
                         the professor.  He sees me there
                         now and then.

                                   PETER
                             (snidely)
                         Yes.  Usually lying on the couch 
                         in the student union.

                                   SOREN
                         A good place to think.  

                                   PETER
                         Or to get over a hangover.

                                   SOREN
                         That too.  I am also busy at
                         present, working on a rather long
                         essay, which I hope to have
                         published.

                                   PETER
                         An essay on what?

                                   SOREN
                         Hans Christian Andersen.

               Michael and Peter look mystified.

                                   MICHAEL
                         Hans Christian Andersen?  

                                   SOREN
                         Yes.  My thesis being, as an author
                         he totally lacks a life view.

                                   PETER
                         No "life view"?  He is unlike you,
                         I suppose.  Do you have a life
                         view, Soren?

                                   SOREN
                         Yes, Peter, I do, though not the
                         subject of the essay.  My life 
                         view?  

               Soren speaks amiably despite the bitter nature of his words,

                                   SOREN
                         Why, the darkest Christianity
                         imaginable, instilled in me by my
                         father from the earliest age.  What
                         else would you expect?  

                                   MICHAEL
                             (kindly)
                         We have all sinned, my son, and
                         fall short of the glory of God.

                                   SOREN
                             (to Peter)
                         There, you see?  
                             (to Michael)
                         This fear of hell and damnation in
                         which you raised me, Father --
                         depriving me of a childhood --
                         still weighs on my soul every day. 
                         For how does one get rid of it?  I
                         am just as unhappy as you are. 
                         Doesn't that please you?  

               Peter glares at Soren.

                                   PETER
                         Have you finished?  Must you sit
                         there and mock our father?

                                   SOREN
                             (pleasant air)
                         Mock him?  Nonsense.  If someone
                         should be mocked, it is me.  Let 
                         me tell you a secret -- yes, there
                         should be no secrets in what is
                         left of this curséd family.  Am 
                         I seen as a prodigal son?  I have
                         friends who view me as a carefree
                         bon vivant.  But it's all just a
                         pretense. 
                         I can go to a party and be the soul
                         of wit, I can entertain everyone
                         there -- then go home and want to
                         shoot myself.  That is the secret. 
                         But you needn't fear.  For suicides
                         go to hell, do they not?  So there
                         is no escape from this situation.  
                             (resumes eating)
                         I am finished now, Peter.  

               Michael has a downcast look.  Peter stares at Soren. 

                                   MICHAEL
                         I will pay the rent for your
                         apartment, for one more year.

                                   SOREN
                         Thank you, Father.

                                   MICHAEL
                         Do you need more money yet?

                                   SOREN
                         Yes, Father.  I could use about
                         fifty rixdollars, thank you.

                                   MICHAEL
                         I fear, Soren, that nothing will
                         become of you, as long as you have
                         any money.

                                    SOREN
                         Yes, Father. 

               Silence again descends.

               INT. JANSEN HOME - DAY

               Regine stands beside Mrs. Jansen as the latter prepares tea
               for two elderly lady visitors.

                                   REGINE
                         Auntie, why was Soren Kierkegaard
                         here yesterday?

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Well, I saw him standing outside,
                         and he introduced himself.

                                   REGINE
                         What did you talk about with him?

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Well, we didn't have time to talk
                         about much before -- Regine, do you
                         think he was here to meet you?

                                   REGINE
                         I've been wondering.  Do you know
                         what he told me?  That an angel led
                         him here.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         Why, that silver-tongued devil.

                                   REGINE
                         But he told me there's a curse on
                         his family.

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         A curse?

                                   REGINE
                         So many deaths, at young ages. 
                         Isn't that odd, that he would want
                         to meet me and walk me home, and
                         then try to scare me off?

                                   MRS. JANSEN
                         I don't know.  If there's a curse
                         around, I would want to be told.

               INT. AN INN - PRIVATE DINING ROOM - NIGHT

               Soren, EMIL BOESEN (24), ANDREAS (25), JOHANNES (24), and
               JULIUS (23) are tipsy on wine, a couple of them still
               nibbling food.  

               They laugh, all seated except Julius.  

                                   ANDREAS
                         Sit down, Julius, I believe you've
                         exhausted the subject.

                                   JOHANNES
                         He has exhausted me, that's for
                         sure.

               Julius gladly sits down.

                                   ANDREAS
                         And now we come to Soren
                         Kierkegaard.  On your feet, S.K.

               Soren rises, a glass of wine in hand.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Soren will speak to us all about --
                         what?... Not everyone at once. 
                         Emil?

                                   EMIL
                         Talk to us about life, Soren.

                                   SOREN
                         You want me to talk about life? 
                         Well, let's start with mine.  I 
                         was born in 1813 -- the year the
                         state of Denmark went bankrupt.  I
                         confess:  There were so many
                         counterfeit bills going round, I
                         might as well be considered one of
                         them.

               Soren sips while the others laugh.

                                   SOREN
                         The thing about life is, it only
                         makes sense looking back.  But you
                         can only live it moving forward. 
                         Which makes it hard to know what 
                         to do.  We must make absurd choices.

               Soren sips again.  He becomes serious.

                                   SOREN
                         Looking back... Imagine that you 
                         are a father -- an old one at that,
                         with a tormented soul, almost sixty
                         when your youngest is born.  You
                         show this young child -- and he is
                         only a child -- a picture of the
                         crucified Christ. 

               INTERCUT WITH:

               INT. KIERKEGAARD HOME - STUDY - NIGHT (FLASHBACK)

               In lamp light a man's hand holds for show a print of
               Grunewald's dark painting "Crucifixion."  Christ's body is
               distorted, his arms elongated, with John the Baptist, Bible
               in hand, pointing at him as Christ suffers on the cross. 

                                   SOREN (V.O.)
                         You tell him that this is the
                         Savior.  But the child doesn't know 
                         what that means.  

               Soren gazes into space as he remembers.

                                   SOREN
                         You tell him this crucified man was
                         the most loving man who has ever
                         lived.  

               In the study, 5-YEAR-OLD SOREN looks bewildered, almost
               frightened, by the stark image of Christ he is shown by 
               his 63-year-old father.

                                   SOREN
                         And the child will naturally ask,
                         "Why were they so mean to him,
                         then?"  And the child will wonder
                         why God in heaven did nothing to
                         prevent this.  And this picture was
                         the only impression the child had
                         of the Savior.  It would follow him
                         throughout his life, he could never
                         get away from it. The more dread he
                         had of Christianity, the more he
                         was drawn to it.  This dreadful
                         image seemed to require something
                         of him.  

               END INTERCUT 

               As the adult Soren continues, 

                                   SOREN
                         What then should I make of my life?
                         Please my father, become a pastor
                         in the state church of Denmark? 
                         What does God want me to do?  What 
                         good would it do me to discover
                         some great objective truth, if it
                         doesn't then become part of me?  
                         That, you see, is what I lack in
                         this life.   A truth that is true 
                         for me.  An idea -- something --
                         for which I can live and die. 

               EXT. CARRIAGE - MOVING - NIGHT 

               Soren, Emil, Johannes, and Julius enjoy more wine -- they
               have brought along a bottle and glasses -- as a coachman
               drives them in an open horse carriage toward town.

                                   SOREN
                         Emil, do you know Terkild Olsen? 
                         The state councillor?

                                   EMIL
                         I know of him.  Why?

                                   SOREN
                         He has a lovely daughter.

                                   JULIUS
                         Here's to lovely daughters.

                                   EMIL
                         Whatever happened to Bolette,
                         Soren?

                                   SOREN
                         Did something happen to her?

               Johannes and Julius laugh.  As Johannes refills Soren's
               glass,

                                   JOHANNES
                         Have some more wine, S.K.

                                   SOREN
                         What do you suppose Andreas is up
                         to?  Why did he leave us?

               Johannes and Julius both seem amused, as if sharing a secret.

                                   JULIUS
                         I guess we'll find out soon enough.

               INT. BROTHEL - OLGA'S ROOM - NIGHT

               Andreas gives some money to the MADAM, 50, while OLGA, 28, a
               fairly attractive prostitute in a red frilly robe, stands by.

                                   ANDREAS
                         This is a surprise for our friend,
                         and it may be his first time.

                                   MADAM
                         He will be in good hands.  Olga can
                         be full of surprises.

               Andreas looks at Olga as she smiles.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Yes, I wouldn't be surprised.

               EXT. BROTHEL - NIGHT

               It's an ordinary-looking two-story house from outside, as
               Soren and his three companions arrive in the carriage.

               Andreas appears and steps to the side of the carriage.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Welcome, lads!  Come along inside. 
                         You first, Soren.

               When Soren, a bit drunker than before, is out of the
               carriage, Andreas takes his arm and distracts his attention
               from the house as they walk toward it.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Soren, I hear you're writing
                         something about Hans Christian
                         Andersen.  

                                   SOREN
                         Yes.

                                   ANDREAS
                         What is it you're saying about him?

               Johannes and Julius smile knowingly as they follow Andreas
               and Soren.  Emil, walking last, seems to have misgivings.

               INT. BROTHEL - NIGHT

               Andreas leads Soren directly from the front room to the
               stairs, the others following.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Let's go on upstairs, shall we?

               The Madam watches approvingly as they start up the steps.

               Soren looks around, apparently with some drunken sense of
               deja vu, as they walk up the stairs.

                                   SOREN
                         Is this Mrs. Jansen's?

                                   ANDREAS
                         Why, yes -- Yes, it is Mrs.
                         Jansen's. 

               They reach the top of the stairs.

                                   ANDREAS
                         This first door here is her
                         daughter's room.
                             (knocks on door)
                         You wait here with her, Soren, and
                         we'll be back soon.

               Olga, still in her robe, opens the door from inside the room
               and smiles at them.

                                   ANDREAS
                             (to Olga)
                         Entertain our friend, will you?

                                   OLGA
                         That's what we're here for.

               Andreas turns back toward the stairs.

                                   SOREN
                         Where are you going?

                                   ANDREAS
                         To find Mrs. Jansen.

                                   OLGA
                             (to Soren)
                         Come on in, dear.

               INT. OLGA'S ROOM - NIGHT

               Soren, hat in hand, looks around as Olga closes the door.

                                   OLGA
                         Let me take your hat, dear.  

               Soren hands the hat to her.

                                   OLGA
                         I'm Olga.  Your name is Soren?

                                   SOREN
                         Soren Kierkegaard.  I have been
                         here before.

                                   OLGA
                         Have you?  It is not your first
                         time?

                                   SOREN
                         Well, it was not in this room.

                                   OLGA
                         No, I don't remember you being
                         here.  I'm sure that I would.  What
                         would you like, Soren?

                                   SOREN
                         What would I like?

                                   OLGA
                         What can I do for you?

                                   SOREN
                         Can you play a little Mozart?

               Olga laughs, as she leads Soren to the bed.

                                   OLGA
                         I don't have a piano or harp, and
                         we have no orchestra.  Sit down
                         here.

               Soren sits down on the bed.

                                   OLGA
                         Go ahead and lie down.

               She pushes on him, Soren reclining.

                                   SOREN
                         But I might go to sleep.

               Olga opens her robe.

                                   OLGA
                         Oh, I'll try to keep you awake.

               She shows off in her corset.

                                   SOREN
                         What are you doing?

                                   OLGA
                         I'm going to take off my things,
                         dear.  Shouldn't you start doing
                         the same?

                                   SOREN
                         What if Mrs. Jansen comes in?

                                   OLGA
                         There is no Mrs. Jansen.

               Olga gets on the bed with Soren, and gives his shirt a tug.

                                   OLGA
                         Come on, dear, let's get undressed.

                                   SOREN
                         There is no Mrs. Jansen?

                                   OLGA
                         Don't you like this surprise?  It
                         was arranged by your friends.

                                   SOREN
                         You aren't her daughter.
                             (looks around)
                         Am I in a brothel?

                                   OLGA
                         Where did you think you were?

               Olga starts to unbutton Soren's shirt.

                                   SOREN
                         No!  Get your hands off me!

               Soren scrambles up off the bed.

                                   OLGA
                         What's wrong with you?

                                   SOREN
                         My God.  The sins of my father.

                                   OLGA
                         What?

                                   SOREN
                         I have to get out of here.

                                   OLGA
                         There's the door.  Go ahead and 
                         get out.

               Before Soren reaches the door, his legs seem to buckle and 
               he falls to his knees.

                                    OLGA 
                         Get up and get out of here.

               As Soren stays down, on his hands and knees, Olga sees that
               something is wrong, as he shakes.  She leans down to him.

                                    OLGA 
                         Are you all right?

               Olga starts to put a hand on his back.  Then she suddenly
               steps back as if repulsed.

                                    OLGA 
                         Do you have the falling sickness?

               Soren, through shaking, slowly gets up on one knee, then
               rises to his feet.  He walks out, Olga watching him.

               EXT. BROTHEL - NIGHT

               Soren's four friends wait by the carriage.  Soren comes out
               of the house.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Soren!  Why so quick?

                                   SOREN
                         Damn you!  You bastards!  

                                   ANDREAS
                         Soren --

                                   SOREN
                         How could you do that?  Do you know
                         what it means?

               Soren, still a bit unsteady, walks away.

                                   ANDREAS
                         Soren, wait.  Where are you going?

                                   SOREN
                         Home. 

                                   EMIL
                         Soren, wait.  We will take you.

                                   SOREN
                         I would rather walk.

               Olga appears at an upstairs window.

                                   OLGA
                         Here, your friend forgot his hat.

               Olga throws the hat down, Julius catching it.

               INT. SOREN'S LOVSTRAEDE APARTMENT - DAY (NEXT MORNING)

               Soren, still clothed from the night before, stirs awake on
               his bed in the second-floor apartment.  It rains outside,
               with THUNDER.  

               Soren continues to lie in bed, as if in despair on top of a
               hangover. 

               EXT. STREET (LOVSTRAEDE) - DAY

               In the rain, under flashes of lightning and RUMBLES OF
               THUNDER, someone with an umbrella and Soren's hat walks to 
               7 Lovstraede.

               INT. APARTMENT - DAY

               Soren, disheveled, answers the door.  Outside stands Emil.

                                   EMIL
                         You forgot your hat last night.
                             (hands it to Soren)
                         I tried not to get it wet.

                                   SOREN
                         Thank you.  Would you like to come
                         in?

                                   EMIL
                         I'm on my way to a lecture.  Soren,
                         that brothel last night, I knew
                         nothing about it -- where we were
                         going.

                                   SOREN
                         I understand.

                                   EMIL
                         Andreas said to tell you he's
                         sorry.

                                   SOREN
                         Tell him I forgive him.

                                   EMIL
                         Are you all right?

                                    SOREN
                         Yes.  Thank you.

               Emil nods and turns to go.

               EXT. OLSEN MANSION - NIGHT 

               It's slightly foggy as Soren, with top hat and cane, stops in
               front of the Olsen mansion.  

               A few guests can be seen through a living-room window.  

               Soren stands gazing at the window.  His cane falls from his
               hand.  He looks down at the hand.  It shakes.

               Soren stoops and picks up the cane.  There are FOOTSTEPS. 
               Rising, he is joined by gentleman FRITZ SCHLEGEL, 28.

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         Mister Kierkegaard.

                                   SOREN
                         Good evening, Mister Schlegel.

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         Going to the Olsens' open house?

                                   SOREN
                         No.  I was just passing by.

               Schlegel proceeds to the front door and knocks.  

               A young OLSEN MAID answers the door, and Schlegel goes in,
               while Soren watches.

               Soren gazes at the window a moment longer.  He flexes his
               hand, and moves off down the street.

               INT. OLSEN MANSION - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

               Several guests are at open house, hosted by TERKILD OLSEN,
               38, and MRS. OLSEN, 37.

               Regine enters.  She looks around, as if for someone she hopes
               to see.  She nods to a guest, then sees Schlegel, drinking
               coffee.  Smiling, he rises from his chair.  She walks over.

                                   REGINE
                         Hello, Fritz.

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         Good evening, Regine.  Will you
                         join me?

                                   REGINE
                         Of course.

               They sit down together.

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         There is something I've been
                         wanting to tell you, my dear.  You
                         were always my favorite pupil.

                                   REGINE
                         Well thank you.  And you are a
                         marvelous teacher.  

               Regine looks around again.

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         Are you expecting someone?

                                   REGINE
                         Sort of.  I mean he was invited. 
                         Do you know Soren Kierkegaard?

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         When I came here this evening, he
                         was standing outside.  Claimed he
                         was just passing by.  Dropped his
                         cane.  I think he may have been
                         drunk.  Do you know him well?

                                   REGINE
                         Well, I haven't known him for long. 
                         He was standing outside?

                                   SCHLEGEL
                         A rather odd fellow.  Walks the
                         streets every day, as if he has
                         nothing better to do.  Perhaps he
                         doesn't.  His wealthy father
                         supports him.  If I were his
                         father, I would tell him to go 
                         find a charity.

               INT. MUSIC TEACHER'S HOME - DAY

               Regine has another singing lesson with her Music Teacher,
               while Thrine waits.

                                   MUSIC TEACHER
                         No, Regine.  Remember, sing from
                         here.

               EXT. AMAGERTORV STREET - DAY

               Regine and Thrine walk their usual route after Regine's music
               lesson.

                                   THRINE
                         What are you going to do if Fritz
                         Schlegel proposes?

                                   REGINE
                         I don't know.  

                                   THRINE
                         Well what do you really think of
                         him?

                                   REGINE
                         I'm not in love with him, if that's
                         what you mean.  But I have always
                         liked him.

                                   THRINE
                         But you're waiting on Soren.  

                                   REGINE
                         I haven't said that.

                                   THRINE
                         What makes you think Soren might
                         propose?

                                   REGINE
                         Well, he followed me to my aunt's,
                         I think, and then walked me home. 
                         And it's the way that he talked.

                                   THRINE
                         He could charm all the girls.

                                   REGINE
                         So who is he charming?  Do you
                         know?

                                   THRINE
                         The only one I've known about is
                         Bolette.

                                   REGINE
                         Bolette.  That was two years ago.

                                   THRINE
                         Has Soren been once to your open
                         house?

                                   REGINE
                         No, but he wanted to.  He was seen
                         outside.

                                   THRINE
                         Well did someone not let him in?
                         If you wait for Soren, and he never
                         proposes, you could lose out on
                         both.

                                   REGINE
                         Well it won't be the end of the
                         world.  I don't think I'll be an
                         old maid.

                                   THRINE
                         No.  But it would be the end of
                         Soren.  You might die of a broken
                         heart.

               INT. PLEISCH'S TEAROOM - DAY

               Soren, at the same table as before, this time with Emil,
               looks out the window.   

                                   SOREN
                         There, Emil.

               Emil looks.  Regine walks by outside with Thrine.

                                   SOREN
                         I have watched her each week go
                         home from her music lesson.  Once 
                         I dared to follow her.  

               One of the patrons, HANS BROCHNER, 37, sits watching Soren
               with a knowing look.

                                   SOREN
                             (to Emil)
                         You, my old childhood friend, are
                         the only one I can show her to.

               EXT. AMAGERTORV STREET - DAY 

               Soren and Emil walk together.

                                   EMIL
                         Why don't you go after her, Soren?

                                   SOREN
                         You mean marry her?  Don't you know
                         that there are but two of us left,
                         my brother Peter and I?  And that
                         our father, who is eighty-two years
                         old, is fated to outlive us both?

               Emil looks quizzically at Soren.

                                   EMIL
                         You don't know that.

                                   SOREN
                         Yes, I do.  It's a curse.

                                   EMIL
                         And that's why you can't marry?

                                   SOREN
                         It would be irresponsible.

               They stop at a corner where they are to part ways.

                                   SOREN
                         I will see you tomorrow, Emil.

               Soren starts to walk off.

                                   EMIL
                         Soren... What is the source of this
                         "curse"?

                                   SOREN
                         I can't talk about it, outside of
                         the family.  Do you want to know a
                         favorite Bible verse?  "The father
                         has eaten sour grapes, and the
                         children's teeth are set on edge."  

               Soren walks away, Emil watching him.

               INT. OLSEN MANSION - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

               Regine, with sheet music, plays the piano.  Her brother
               JONAS, 19, steps to the piano and leans on it, to speak
               confidentially.

                                   JONAS
                         Do you know what Hans Brochner told
                         me?

               Regine glances at him as she plays.

                                   REGINE
                         How would I know what he told you?

               Jonas waits, a little smirk on his face, till she stops
               playing and looks at him.

                                   JONAS
                         Each time you walk home from your
                         music lesson, Soren Kierkegaard
                         sits in Pleisch's Tearoom and
                         watches you.

               Regine looks intrigued, then,

                                   REGINE
                         If he spends a lot of time there,
                         what is strange about that?

                                   JONAS
                         You are why he is there, when you
                         go walking past.

               Regine looks intrigued again.  Then, as she looks at her
               sheet music,

                                   REGINE
                         How does Hans Brochner know this? 
                         Is he there to watch me too?

                                   JONAS
                         There are others with eyes, my
                         dear.  It will be soon be common
                         knowledge.

                                   REGINE
                         I know Soren watches me.

                                   JONAS
                         You know?

                                   REGINE
                         Well I know he followed me once, to
                         Henriette's.  And then he walked me
                         home.

                                   JONAS
                         You probably thought he just saw
                         you on the street and followed you. 
                         He does walk the streets every day
                         like a vagrant.

                                   REGINE
                             (amused)
                         He is hardly a vagrant.  Are you
                         jealous of his independence?

                                   JONAS
                             (spitefully)
                         I thought my little sister might
                         like to know he's been watching you
                         as if he were some old lecher.

               Jonas turns to go.

                                   REGINE
                         Have you never watched a girl,
                         Jonas?

               Jonas gives her a look and walks off.

               Regine thinks.  She looks delighted and smiles to herself.

               INT. SOREN'S LOVSTRAEDE APARTMENT - NIGHT

               Soren, drinking a glass of wine, sits trying to read a book. 
               He gives up in disinterest.  He seems totally at loose ends.

               There is an urgent KNOCKING on the door.  Rising, Soren goes
               to the door and opens it.

               Outside Soren finds Peter's servant ANDERS, 21.

                                   SOREN
                         Anders, what is it?

                                   ANDERS
                         Your brother sent me.  It's your
                         father.  He seems gravely ill.

               INT. KIERKEGAARD HOME - MICHAEL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Michael lies semiconscious in bed.  Peter sits prayerfully at
               the bedside.  A DOCTOR, 55, sits on the other side.  

               Soren enters.  The doctor rises and walks over to him.

                                   DOCTOR
                         He passed out today.  He refuses to
                         go to the hospital.  I think your
                         father is simply worn out.

               INT. SITTING ROOM - NIGHT 

               Soren sits alone with a glass of sherry, the decanter nearby.  

               Peter steps to the decanter and pours himself some sherry. 
               He sits down across from Soren.

                                   PETER
                         If he dies, will that settle the
                         curse for you?

                                   SOREN
                         But that is just it.  How can he
                         die, before you and I do?

                                   PETER
                         You really believe that.  You are 
                         convinced there's a curse.

                                   SOREN
                         I know that our father has been
                         convinced.  Has there not been
                         enough death to convince even you?

                                   PETER
                         And what brought about this curse?
                         Let me be sure that I have this
                         right.  You believe it because our
                         father, quite the rounder in his 
                         day, had to marry our mother the
                         housemaid, soon after his first
                         wife's demise.

               Soren looks grim upon being reminded.

                                   SOREN
                         What an earthquake that was in my 
                         life, the day I learned the truth 
                         about Father and Mother.

                                   PETER
                         Is that all there is to it?

                                   SOREN
                         Yes, that's all there is to it, I
                         suppose, as unjust as it may seem.
                         You and I and all of our siblings
                         came into existence against God's
                         will.  Because of our father's sin. 
                         And save you and me, all have paid
                         the price.  So believes our father. 
                         I am inclined to believe it myself.  

               Soren finishes his sherry and sets aside the glass.  

                                   PETER
                         He never told you about the Jutland
                         moor?

               Soren looks quizzically at Peter.

                                   SOREN
                         The Jutland moor?  What about it?

               Rising, Peter refills Soren's empty glass, hands it to him,
               then pours more sherry for himself.  

                                   PETER
                         As he told it to me, when our
                         father was about twelve years old --
                         a dirt-poor shepherd boy from the
                         village of Sedding in Jutland -- he
                         was tending their few sheep one day 
                         on the moor.  Miserable as always,
                         cold and hungry, the boy finally
                         had all he could take.  He raised 
                         a fist to the heavens, and cursed
                         Almighty God.

                                   SOREN
                         How?  What did he say?

                                   PETER
                         Oh, I don't know the words.  He
                         didn't tell me that.
                             (sits down)
                         But very soon after his cursing of
                         God, he received the great news 
                         that he was being sent to
                         Copenhagen, to work for his uncle,
                         because there were too many mouths
                         to feed in Sedding.  You know the
                         story.  Father worked for his uncle
                         here, learned the hosiery trade,
                         set up his own business, and became
                         a rich man. 

               Peter sips, Soren intently waiting.

                                   PETER
                         It all seemed too good to be true.
                         And it was.  In his prosperity he
                         had seven children.  But then one
                         by one they were taken from him,
                         and then the wife too, till there
                         were left only you and myself.  All
                         of his wealth meant nothing, could
                         not assuage his guilt, his torment
                         and grief. 

               Peter regards Soren, who stares at him.

                                   PETER
                         All through the years, you see,
                         since he was twelve years old, our
                         father has believed that on the
                         Jutland moor he committed the
                         unpardonable sin.

               Soren rises impulsively.

                                   SOREN
                         But it isn't so.  There is no 
                         unpardonable sin.  I don't care
                         what he said to God on the moor.

                                   PETER
                         Then there is no curse.

                                   SOREN
                         And all of the deaths?

                                   PETER
                         Misfortune.  An unfair lot in life. 
                         Nothing more, nothing less.

                                   SOREN
                         And none of them -- none of them --
                         lived past the age of Christ.

                                   PETER
                         No.  I am thirty-three, Soren.  I
                         don't plan to die soon.  It is time 
                         to put away the Kierkegaard family
                         curse.

               Soren gazes thoughtfully at his brother.

               INT. MICHAEL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Soren sits close at the bedside.  He places his hand on
               Michael's hand, which lies on Michael's chest.  

                                   SOREN
                         Father...

               Michael opens his eyes.  He looks weakly, fondly at Soren.

                                   SOREN
                         How can I say how much I owe you?  
                         I owe you my life.  The greatest
                         debt of all is to owe one's life to
                         another.  It is a debt that cannot
                         be repaid, or even fathomed.  I 
                         am grateful that I am your greatest
                         debtor.  And remember this, Father. 
                         God forgives, and forgets.  Even
                         God, being all-powerful, can 
                         forget our sins if he wills it.  
                         As long as we are repentant before
                         him.  Are you truly repentant,
                         Father?

               Michael weakly nods "yes."

                                   SOREN
                         Then that's all that matters.

               EXT. CEMETERY - DAY 

               Soren, Peter, and other mourners (including the Lunds, who
               will be met later) are gathered around the casket.  BISHOP
               JAKOB MYNSTER, 65, officiates.

                                   MYNSTER
                         The Lord bless thee and keep thee,
                         the Lord make his face shine upon 
                         thee, and be gracious unto thee, 
                         the Lord lift up his countenance
                         upon thee, and give thee peace.


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